Melissa Mihalovic
Weds-6:30PM-9:50PM
Argumentative Essay
Draft
Women should be able to breastfeed in public without feeling embarrassed or being criticized. Breastfeeding is one of the most natural ways of feeding your infant baby. It develops a special bond between the Mother and her new baby. Breastfeeding in public is one of the most controversial topics in today’s society. Breastfeeding in public is simply misunderstood and thought of by most people as an act of indecent exposure.
There are health benefits to breastfeeding for both the Mother and baby, reasons why public facilities as in restaurants, malls and places of employment should provide an area for breastfeeding Mothers to feed their babies, and reasons why a Mother should be able to breastfeed in public.
There are many health benefits for both Mothers and babies to breastfeed. Breast feeding milk fights disease, the antibodies in breast milk help protect babies from illness, lower respiratory infections, asthma obesity, and type 2 diabetes. It also has been shown to lower the risk of SIDS (sudden infant death syndrome). It can be good for the Mother too and is linked to a lower risk of certain health problems including; type 2 diabetes, breast cancer, ovarian cancer and postpartum depression. It can help save money and can feel great, the bond and physical contact is important to the Mother and the baby, it helps the baby feel more secure, warm, and comforted. There are even some studies shown that breastfeeding can assist the Mother with weight loss after pregnancy.
For nearly two years the U.S. department of Health and Human Services launched a campaign to promote breastfeeding by educating Mothers about the risks and importance of breastfeeding. This increased the rates of breastfeeding in the U.S over the next three years by 75%. This sparked the term “breast is best”, and these rates are higher in middle class, educated Mothers. Communities have passed laws to support breastfeeding moms in the workplace they have passed laws to ensure that breastfeeding in public is not seen as indecency but a right, and therefore protects the rights of the mother. The Wisconsin law reads as follows:
Section 1.253.16: Right to breast-feed. A mother may breast-feed her child in any public or private location where the mother and child are otherwise authorized to be. In such a location, no person may prohibit a mother from breast-feeding her child, direct a mother to move to a different location to breast-feed her child, direct a mother to cover her child or breast while breast feeding, or otherwise restrict a mother from breast-feeding her child as provided in this section.
Doctor’s, midwives, and nutritionist all recommend mothers’ breastfeed their babies for the health benefits still remains controversial. While society wants moms to breastfeed they want them to do it behind close doors. In 2007 there was an incident at an Applebee’s restaurant where a nursing mother was breastfeeding her baby and was asked by a employee to cover herself while she was nursing or to leave the premises. This was in despite of a law that extended mothers rights to breastfeed in public. Applebee’s received so many calls to headquarters by
Outraged mothers regarding this incident that all Applebee’s in the U.S. developed “nurseins” at every restaurant.
Infants require feeding almost every 2 hours at times, and a mother can not plan her day around a breastfeeding child with this frequent feeding schedule it is almost impossible. Breastfeeding moms that breastfeed in public are subject to scrutiny by individuals that do not see breastfeeding for what it is, but rather as a public display of exposure. The La Leche League International offers a few different ways to respond to people that criticize, ignore the comments or change the subject, share information on breastfeeding with the other person, make a joke about the situation to lighten the mood, show that you are recognizing the person’s viewpoint by asking further questions without agreeing or responding to the criticism.
Breastfeeding mothers and breastfeeding in public continue to be on the rise and should not be viewed as indecency. I view it as if a mother is breastfeeding in a public place it is their right by law in most states, and if it bothers someone that bad look away, and remember babies must eat too and they eat all the time, why is it ok to scrutinize breastfeeding mothers when they are just feeding their hungry babies.
Im very happy to see that you chose this topic!!! your facts were very well stated and your thesis is easy to spot. the obvious fix is the last couple paragraphs are indented also work cited :) great job! i really like it!
ReplyDeleteThis is a subject that is very important to me. I didn't see too many gramatical errors, or any spelling mistakes. I shared with you the information I would look for.
ReplyDeleteIt was very easy to understand the different arguments why you should and shouldn't breastfeed in public. Your thesis was very easy to pick out. I love this topic because my husband and I always fight over this whenever this comes up. I do not breastfeed mainly because I'm always on the go and feel like I don't have enough time. I really like some of you supporting research such as "Breast feeding milk fights disease, the antibodies in breast milk help protect babies from illness, lower respiratory infections, asthma obesity, and type 2 diabetes." Honestly I didn't really know this until now. I like to see maybe one or two more supporting details for why breastfeeding in public is ok. Overall great job. I thought your outline flow really well.
ReplyDeleteI love your topic and how you have started. I easily picked out your thesis. I think you should put in some personal stories. I think if you search for some articles on this you will have a lot of information to back up your argument.
ReplyDeleteGreat thesis good suject your stuck with it and supported it well. Make sure to read carefully that it is the right word you want to use. good job
ReplyDeleteThe thesis is very clear in the first paragraph. I agree as should everyone that breast feeding is needed for every baby. I also feel that breast feeding should be better supported for women in the public. I also think modesty should be better practiced by some women in public. I personally dont care. Its completely natural. But I resent the women with her nipple exposed in the middle of the mall and especially when im eating in a restaurant. You support alot of arguments very well. I liek the tpic and think you will get an A. Just a few errors otherwise.
ReplyDeleteVery clear thesis. Everyone should be able to breast feed in public. I have never seen a problem with it. Only a few spelling errors. But nothing major. Other than that good essay!
ReplyDeleteI was able to pick out your thesis statement very easily, that breast feeding in public should be ok. I think this is a very good point, and feel the same way. I like how you talk about all the good things that breast milk does for a baby. No errors that i noticed, and every thing seemed in place. Well done
ReplyDeleteYou start out very strong and hit home with points and your thesis right away.You include a lot of great information both emotional and scientific. I liked the example of the woman at applebees being asked to cover up or leave. Maybe include more examples of women being asked to not breast feed in public. Maybe a better call to action. Make me care aside from the heath reasons why I should support it. I think you have a great paper here.
ReplyDeleteGood points, your thesis is clear. I wonder if you could talk more about the legal ramifications of if they choose to. This is informative. Good Job
ReplyDeleteVery good points and I agree with you completely. One thing I did miss about Flagstaff were the liberal and hippie ideas, and people there would not even think twice because like you said it is a natural thing! Good thesis statement and research. I also liked the indented quotes! There were a couple grammar errors but you were good on spelling.
ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome topic to argue about and I totally agree with you! You have some great facts and I like the law that you posted about breastfeeding
ReplyDeleteFirst of all I want to say that I really liked your topic, I currently have a daughter that my wife breast fed and another on the way that she is going to do the same. I don't understand why this is such a controversial topic because it is such a natural thing. I was able to pick out your thesis right away. I think you have some really good information. I did not find any errors really. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThesis is about being able to breast feed in public or not. well-stated. First sentence is missing the word women possibly? I like that you point out the benefits of breast feeding not only for the child but the mother alike. This essay is one of my favorites of the week and wish I could read the final draft. Thank You very much for the information.
ReplyDeleteYou've done really well on this story but the creditability factor is not there your sources and bibliography and sources should be listed good work though.
ReplyDeleteI know we spoke about your essay and the fact that you are seemingly writing 2 essays at once--The Benefits of Breastfeeding and Breasfeeding in Public Should Be Legal. You can successfully combine these two but you need to devote enough attenion to both if you decide to go that route. Make sure you directly quote research--both pro and con so you can de-bunk the con as part of your argument.
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